this one started as a sentence fragment:
...which was then distilled to something more senryu-esque:
I’m still trying to decide which I like better...
how thoughtful of the train
to give me so much time
to solve the master sudoku
...which was then distilled to something more senryu-esque:
train running late
I solve
the master sudoku
I’m still trying to decide which I like better...
posted by extraspecialbitter at 1:23 PM
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I personally like the first haiku better than the second. See you in a few weeks. Did Beefy tell you she bought her plane ticket here? We are probably not going to drive to South Carolina until Thursday night so that Jason can come too. I love you daddy!
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