for Josiah
summer fog —
the recruiter’s shiny new car
pulls up to the house
extra special bitter | ||
hops are bitter. life is bitter. coincidence? |
Wednesday, August 08, 2007
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4 Comments:
birdshot ought to clear it up...
This haiku reminds me of a young boy getting talked into joining the army. What did you write it about?
trena - had it been my house and not my ex-wife's house, birdshot would have been an option.
haikugirl - this is about my son Josiah, who joined the marines last Wednesday. his recruiter picked him up and drove him to his swearing-in ceremony in a shiny new sports car.
oh, Josiah, Josiah...
Special - life and death are still abstract ... my thoughts will continue to be with you and your family ... mind's eye everyday, i will see him coming home, safe and sound ...
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