can you?
can you spend the night?
a log in the fireplace
pops
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can you spend the night?
a log in the fireplace
pops
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hops are bitter. life is bitter. coincidence? |
Sunday, October 15, 2006
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3 Comments:
every time i try typing a comment, i find that it looks silly underneath your perfectly understated haiku.
like this comment does now.
cy - I'm always awed by your kind words. I wrote this as part of a "first date" series I've been working on. Stay tuned.
Yeah, this is good. Got some images floating around now. I like the last line, just one word. Of course I think of logs popping.
"..in the fireplace pops."
I also think of champagne.
"..in the fireplace; pops."
Yeah, this is good.
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